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Wow, it's been a long time since I've written any fiction. The idea for this one just came to me on a walk. With limited writing time and just one simple, crystal idea, I thought it would make an effective drabble, a 100-word story. You judge. I'll warn you, it's depressing.

Title: Paradise
Author: Bardicvoice
Characters: Bobby and Castiel, discussing Sam and Dean
Rating: G
Warnings: Umm, Winchester brothers being Winchester brothers, no matter what.
Word count: 100
Summary: "Each soul makes its own Heaven."


Paradise

“That's some seriously screwed up shit.” Bobby handed Castiel a beer. The angel nodded at his surroundings.


“Each soul makes its own Heaven.”


“Yeah, but – if any two souls were gonna share, I thought it would be Sam and Dean. I mean, hell: they were never really happy apart. And Heaven is what makes you happy. They deserve that.”


Castiel shrugged.


“And that is the problem. They each understand exactly where they are. But their own happiness requires the other being alive – so in their separate heavens, they each believe the other survived and is safe.”


“Balls,” Bobby said.


“Idjits.”



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Date: 2014-02-23 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com
But if they were together in heaven, wouldn't that work too??? I mean, I get your point--and it is sad--but dead together is still together, right???

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Date: 2014-02-23 06:46 pm (UTC)
ext_53694: Signature Cakehole_Cat (DeanSky by <lj user=clubinthesky>)
From: [identity profile] bardicvoice.livejournal.com
Denial is more than a river in Egypt ... *wry grin* I kept thinking about the brothers always sacrificing themselves - or trying to sacrifice themselves - so the other would live, and just took that to its logical extreme. Damn! Idjits. (And that's why we love them, eh?) :)

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Date: 2014-02-23 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irismay42.livejournal.com
Ooh that has a scary logic to it!

I don't like the SPN idea of Heaven. I'd want to be with all my family and friends, not all by myself. I'm sure that's certainly something Dean would want. And I'd think Sam might want to see Jessica even if he was fed up with Dean! Hmm...

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